by Zoe
Crisis, identity, unity
Mortal terror, hopeful
Fled
End, burdens
Desperate, poor, unexpected
Last dim pools of hope drain away
Essential, trapped
Crisis
Pride, war
Tested, collapse, precarious
Limits, powerful, overwhelm
Rejected, labor, protest
Refuse, bodies, drowned
Wander
Poor, war, leave
Resist, dangerous
Imagine, peace
Fell
Not
Wow. This writing is amazing. I love the line, “Last dim pools of hope drain away.” Blackout poetry is so fun!
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Wow, Zoe. This much be such a sad tragedy going on in your life. Keep on writing and you will have hope. You paint a picture of sorrow and depth in my mind that is truly amazing and only what a great writer could do.
Best Wishes,
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LOL Evie…
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